Comment on the best bits:You've got enough footage to get the edits working to move the story along. The music is right for the piece. The exchange of the note is nicely done.Things you can improve:Not so much laughing! You have to kind of wipe your face clean when you are in a shot, so that you don't giggle. Too much hand held.Marks are out of 3 for this:0 means you haven't done it.1 is lowest - it means that there is a lot that needs to be done, but that you have the material to sort it out and make it work.2 means that you've done the job competently and it is OK.3 means that you've done some parts of it really very well, and should work to exploit this.CAMERAMedium Shot MS 2Long Shot LS 2Close Up CU 1XLS - extreme long shot 1XCU - extreme close up 1Pan 2Tilt 2Zoom 2Cross focus 0Deep focus 0Tracking shot (dolly, hand held, shoulder shot) 2Point of View - POV 2Use of tripod 1EDITShot - reverse shot 2Establishing shot 2Cut 2Dissolve 1EVALUATION mark 0Total 25/54
You'll have to let Tarikh know that I can't give him a mark until he has a Blog.
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