Film: 23/40 (Top level 2)
Your film is much improved from the first draft but still needs development in the transitions and sound to move to level 3.
Poster: 7/10
Improvements made. Follows conventions, shows proficiency in technical skill.
Article: 6/10
Demonstrates basic technical skills and good understanding of conventions. Article needs to finish correctly - it seems to trail off. Should also be in paragraphs i.e. ident 2 spaces ecah new paragraph. Possibly add pull quote to break up text and add interest.
Friday, 7 May 2010
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